Skyrim talk:Honorhall Orphanage

Revision 84625 6 Jan 2012

I made several revisions to this page at this early stage. But am not particularly in love with them. I will watch this page in case any future reviewer wants to discuss any of the changes I made. Trying to figure out a reasonable balance between advice I see on the wiki about "being bold" in editing, with suggestions that it can be good to flag issues for discussions on talk pages before just revising others' work. So, I guess by making some changes and also leaving this note, I'm trying to do some of both. Some of the changes I made are subjective, and some of probably don't match some established standards. If anyone has the inclination to provide me with any tips, I will learn from them. Or trading opinions, even about little things, I generally enjoy.

I visited both the orphanage and the Aretino Residence at several time periods after completing Innocence Lost, from quite soon after until quite long after. The little girl at the orphanage sometimes specifically asks you to adopt her, but there appears to be no mechanism for doing so. One of the boys wishes that he would be adopted. Another boy comments that "it's too bad" the orphanage doesn't allow them to be adopted. Aventus remains in his Windhelm home, stating that he wishes to become an assassin someday, "like you." After the NPCs there talk with you a bit, they will invariably begin making comments that suggest you are not welcome, "shouldn't be there," or wonder "what a person like you is doing in a place like this." And that's a pretty good point: What am I doing here? .... I guess mainly trying to learn a bit more about developing good place pages. --Jreynolds2^Talk 07:44, 6 January 2012 (UTC)

Room

There is a room with some shackles in it in the orphanage.Should this be added to the article?--Skyrimplayer 15:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Yep. I found the 'torture room' quite amusing when I first visited the orphanage, and it should definitely be included in the article. It hasn't really been fleshed out yet, so feel free to add whatever detail you think should be included as appropriate for a place page. :) -ABCface^◥ 17:41, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Ok.I'll do that.'-'--Skyrimplayer 17:53, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

It's done.^-^--Skyrimplayer 17:59, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Childrens' Chest

There are no objects in the children's chest.

Moved the above from this edit to the article page (14:38, 10 February 2013‎ by 90.197.110.131) significance? --JR (talk) 18:46, 10 February 2013 (GMT)